Tuesday, October 2, 2012
Blog #4 Peer Editing
Revising and editing my peer’s essays helped me
to improve my paper. Reading their papers gave me more ideas that I could add
to my essay. Also, this showed me different point of views on how people feel
about drinking. Both of my peer’s had very well written essays. I found some
errors but nothing too major. I feel that criterion definitely helped because
it made us find the little mistakes we did not realize we made. Criterion also
showed me that I overused certain words. I also liked how criterion grades your
paper and shows where your mistakes are and how you can fix them. My peers told
me that my essay was very good, but they still found a few mistakes that I need
to correct. Then I just have to shorten my essay, and I will be all done!
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I agree; I think that revising and editing the essays helped to improve my paper as well. Everyone in my group had different views as well as perspectives, yet we all respected eachother's opinions. I also think that Criterion is a great help. And I have to shorten my essay too. I wrote way too much!
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